I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Brodie I was looking at your blog i found this and i'm kinda disappointed (this is not a hate comment) i think you should have some more facts about ramadan like i really want to know about where food i think you should add more text to explain not just going ''we have been learning about ramadan''
Kia ora Brodie. Isabella here! I really like your background colours very nice kinda bright colours but then nice and dark. and ways I just kept on reading I didn't stop it was so interesting and cool. So next time you could add more facts and The ramadan part should be with capital (Ramadan) and like The part at the End Well (The End) I mean it's not a story so instead you should say Make sure to come back, Hope you Enjoyed Bye. But Still very good though. Anyways Blog ya later BYE! #AWESOME
Kia ora Brodie. I am glad to see that you have been posting your learning to your blog. When you share facts, do you write them in your own words so that you understand what you are sharing? Some of this looks like it is copied and pasted from another source.
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Hi Brodie I was looking at your blog i found this and i'm kinda disappointed (this is not a hate comment) i think you should have some more facts about ramadan like i really want to know about where food i think you should add more text to explain not just going ''we have been learning about ramadan''
ReplyDeletewell this is all bye brodie (Riley)
Kia ora Brodie. Isabella here!
ReplyDeleteI really like your background colours very nice kinda bright colours but then nice and dark. and ways I just kept on reading I didn't stop it was so interesting and cool. So next time you could add more facts and The ramadan part should be with capital (Ramadan) and like The part at the End Well
(The End) I mean it's not a story so instead you should say Make sure to come back, Hope you Enjoyed Bye. But Still very good though. Anyways Blog ya later BYE! #AWESOME
hi its jonte here i like the way that you put your back round and by
ReplyDeleteKia ora Brodie.
ReplyDeleteI am glad to see that you have been posting your learning to your blog. When you share facts, do you write them in your own words so that you understand what you are sharing? Some of this looks like it is copied and pasted from another source.