I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, 31 May 2019
Octopus vs scuba diver
When I was getting eaten by a octopus I poop my pants.Because I was scert. It tryed to eat my head but benaiah was. There benaiah was just look and look intall. I said something and then he finally got it off! Me. The octopus was slimy and sticky. By the way we were in the sea. The end bye.
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Kia Ora Brodie! Well done for using describing words about the octopus. Next time I think you should read your work out loud to decide where the full stops can go. Can't wait to read more of your writing!
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