I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Brodie. I like how your facts are written by you and are quick and easy to read. I think a picture on each slide could help to make your work a bit more interesting for your viewers.
Hi Brodie, I agree with Miss Waho... images would really add to your slides> I love how your facts are clear and to the point though. You've taught me a thing or two about Turtles! Make sure you check your emails... I've sent you one about literacy.
Good facts Brodie.I would love to see pictures, real life and animations perhaps like off of finding Nemo. That was a good font size.Get a little creative and splash some pictures into that blog.Stay awesome.
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Kia ora Brodie.
ReplyDeleteI like how your facts are written by you and are quick and easy to read. I think a picture on each slide could help to make your work a bit more interesting for your viewers.
Hi Brodie,
ReplyDeleteI agree with Miss Waho... images would really add to your slides> I love how your facts are clear and to the point though. You've taught me a thing or two about Turtles! Make sure you check your emails... I've sent you one about literacy.
Hi brodie It's Cody great facts did you know turtles are really fast next time maby put some more facts.
ReplyDeleteGood facts Brodie.I would love to see pictures, real life and animations perhaps like off of finding Nemo. That was a good font size.Get a little creative and splash some pictures into that blog.Stay awesome.
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