I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Great facts. I love Lions. The lions at Orana park are so impressive.Great topic Brodie. Perhaps for your next slide you might be able to put some cool pictures or designs into the background.I wonder if there is a picture of the biggest lion? Awesome effort dude.
Kia ora Brodie. You have shared a great number of facts about lions. I agree with Hamish about putting some pictures in to math each fact. If you share your slide with me I can help you with that. Finding pictures of lions seems like a fun thing to do. I would also go through and put a full stop at the end of each sentence. Well done for adding another blog post.
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Hi Brodie Cody good how are you going. this is awesome facts. did you know can run as fast as 80km/h bye.
ReplyDeleteGreat facts. I love Lions. The lions at Orana park are so impressive.Great topic Brodie. Perhaps for your next slide you might be able to put some cool pictures or designs into the background.I wonder if there is a picture of the biggest lion? Awesome effort dude.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Brodie.
ReplyDeleteYou have shared a great number of facts about lions. I agree with Hamish about putting some pictures in to math each fact. If you share your slide with me I can help you with that. Finding pictures of lions seems like a fun thing to do.
I would also go through and put a full stop at the end of each sentence.
Well done for adding another blog post.