I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Brodie it is lucy here from gilberthorpe school maybe next time you could add more words into you derstrpshoin. i liked how you took your time.when i read your post i learnt not to just add pretty fonts or enything like pithchers that we all do not need.
Kia Ora Brodie its Kaycee from your class I really like what your writing its amazing I really like you cats name Maybe next time you could add more information well ill blog you later
Kia ora Brodie Bea here, I like your cat and maybe next time you could put more word about her or he and the facts you have used are good.I like the name of the cat and I kind of like. Blog you later Brodie
HI Brodie, I like your cat name, which is called Marmalade. It is such a cool name, I like it! Maybe did you saw that your spelling and grammar did have problem, oney of your word spell wrong and two words did not make sense? Maybe you could do more description about your cat, bye!!!!!!!!
hey brodie its banana here i liked the way you put the funny photo of the cat you brought me back to when we did this pet description why did you do blog post bye
Kia Ora Brodie,Acasia here I really like how you have laid this blog post out. I really like the name for your cat. Do you have this cat or is it just what you would like? Maybe next time you could say something before the post like what you were told to do or something but over all this is a great post!
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Kia ora Brodie it is lucy here from gilberthorpe school maybe next time you could add more words into you derstrpshoin. i liked how you took your time.when i read your post i learnt not to just add pretty fonts or enything like pithchers that we all do not need.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Brodie its Kaycee from your class
ReplyDeleteI really like what your writing its amazing
I really like you cats name
Maybe next time you could add more information
well ill blog you later
Kia ora Brodie Bea here,
ReplyDeleteI like your cat and maybe next time you could put more word about her or he and the facts you have used are good.I like the name of the cat and I kind of like.
Blog you later Brodie
HI Brodie, I like your cat name, which is called Marmalade. It is such a cool name, I like it! Maybe did you saw that your spelling and grammar did have problem, oney of your word spell wrong and two words did not make sense? Maybe you could do more description about your cat, bye!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletehey brodie its banana here
ReplyDeletei liked the way you put the funny photo of the cat
you brought me back to when we did this pet description
why did you do blog post
bye
Hi brodie Addison here I like this blog post I like how you did marmalade even tho you could of done lamb lamb
ReplyDeletekeep up the good work"
Love Addison
Kia Ora Brodie,Acasia here
ReplyDeleteI really like how you have laid this blog post out. I really like the name for your cat. Do you have this cat or is it just what you would like? Maybe next time you could say something before the post like what you were told to do or something but over all this is a great post!
like your cat that name is a nice name to call a cat an your cat looks like a wonder full cat
ReplyDeleteHi it's Cody your cat sounds nice next time maby does your cat actually kiss ok bye
ReplyDeletesup brodie
ReplyDeleteit is olivia m l likeyou pet work and the pet is good one and your best friend.. good bye
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Deletei like the name marmalade and marmalade to.
ReplyDeleteI like your cat but sorry I don't usually like cats but they sure cute make sure she doesn't scratch anyone.
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