I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Brodie, I like the part when your background of a dog and a cat looks so cute the dog looks like he feels bored. This reminded me of when we started visiting Fanimals and all of us get to pet the dog. Next time, you could spell Fanimals correct bye now!
Kia ora Brodie, Christina here! Love how you putted a video about fanimals and wn I also live the background but maybe put your font bold or a little bigger or you could change your background but other then that good job!
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Hi Brodie, I like the part when your background of a dog and a cat looks so cute the dog looks like he feels bored. This reminded me of when we started visiting Fanimals and all of us get to pet the dog. Next time, you could spell Fanimals correct bye now!
ReplyDeletehi Brodie its micah i like your fanimals slide and the video that you put in the slide the slide is cool but see ya bye
ReplyDeleteKia ora Brodie, Christina here!
ReplyDeleteLove how you putted a video about fanimals and wn
I also live the background but maybe put your font bold or a little bigger or you could change your background but other then that good job!