I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Bonjour Brodie it is Lacie here. I like your blog post about lions. Maybe next time you could change the color of writing to kind of make it easier for the readers to read. Are lions your favorite animal?
Hi brodie! Riley here This very cool! but boring at the same time! did you think about adding more facts i think 3 not enough! to improve i think you should make your slide more decorative more fun! anyway i have to go now bye brodie!
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Bonjour Brodie it is Lacie here.
ReplyDeleteI like your blog post about lions.
Maybe next time you could change the color of writing to kind of make it easier for the readers to read.
Are lions your favorite animal?
Hi brodie! Riley here
ReplyDeleteThis very cool! but boring at the same time!
did you think about adding more facts i think 3 not enough!
to improve i think you should make your slide more decorative more fun!
anyway i have to go now bye brodie!