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Tuesday 25 June 2019

                                                         25 june
Dear. Jeffy 
Can you update our playground because I like climbing can you but a
climbing wall and can you add some swings
  because it is fun going up and down.
                                                                     
                                                    From Brodie.

                                                             

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  1. Miss Rowland27 June 2019 at 12:27

    Hi Brodie,
    Well done for making sure your started and ended your letter the right way! What kind of hook could you add to get your audience really interested in your writing?

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